General Poetry posted May 5, 2016


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War, war and more war

Life

by JP49

Jack
Our child
Born today
Our only one,
As father was killed
In this thing they call war
That rages, kills, day on day,
Whilst not resolving, what's it for?
Lives broken, lost, children fatherless,
Mothers, sweethearts left angry and grieving.




Etheree writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.


New life amidst futility of war which takes so many lives.
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