General Fiction posted November 19, 2016

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Prisoner contest entry

Aging Gracefully on the prison plane

by djeckert

The Prisoner Contest Winner 
-Aging "Gracefully" on this prison plane

I'm a prisoner in this earth suit... I used to wield it with grace and allure as It bumped up to, bounced against and glided with ease along these harsher three dimensions!

But now, as friction and inertia elevate...this over oxidized, brittle, repulsive suit entices its wearer to yearn for those other, more gloriously free-flowing dimensions promised by the Warden, King of ALL Dimension.


Writing Prompt
In 100 words, or less, write a short story--not necessarily a flash-fiction, though it could be--on the theme/subject/topic of 'prisoner'. It could be literal or metaphoric.

The Prisoner
Contest Winner

In My Father's house are many dwelling places; if it were not so, I would have told you; for I go to prepare a place for you
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