General Poetry posted November 4, 2018


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I share the grief of WWI widows and mothers.

Her Grief Is Mine

by RodG

Empathy with Grief Contest Winner 
Her grief is mine--
the young bride
in the small French village
whose husband left to fight
and died,
never knowing
he'd sired the child
still growing
In her womb.
I hear her wailing,
visualize
the endless nights
she cried.

A few years hence
dark-haired daughter
now three
kneels
at her mother's side
planting
pink roses on
her daddy's grave,
without a notion
how or where
he died.

A decade, maybe two
pass
and mother has come
alone.
Bowed head gray,
she kneels beside
her husband's grave.
Silently she weeps
and vividly recalls
that horrid day
she became a widow,
felt the sudden pain
and cried

Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any style that shows empathy for the grief of another human being. There are no line length requirements.

Empathy with Grief
Contest Winner

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This painting is titled GRIEVING WOMAN IN SMALL FRENCH VILLAGE 1917. The artist is likely Laplau Janssen who was Danish. Courtesy of Google images.

I grieve for all the mothers and widows of that generation of young soldiers lost in the Great War a hundred years ago.
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