General Poetry posted December 4, 2018

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When a loved one has health issues

Last Breath

by tempeste

His last breath,
a relief for all
who loved him.

3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a three-line, 3-5-3 syllable count, poem on any aspect of the theme 'air'. It can be on breeze, wind, tornadoes, hurricanes, twisters, breath, or any other topic directly related to air. Creative approaches are welcome. Have fun! :)

Feeling relief after a death, in certain circumstances, does happen. Death often comes after a period of intense and prolonged pain, anxiety, worry, fear, and suffering. Although none of you wanted your loved one die, it 's only human to feel relief when their pain and suffering comes to an end. It 's also human to feel a tinge of relief when the distress you felt as a result of having to watch your loved one struggle has come to an end.
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