General Fiction posted September 12, 2019


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Two friends try to recover a stolen item from a sibling

Stealth is Overrated

by Mackenzie Cooper

"Have you found the medallion yet?", whispered Margaret.

"Not yet", Carmen said in a soft voice.

"Well hurry up! We don't have a lot of time", commanded Margaret.

Carmen rolled her eyes and mocked Margaret's facial expressions while her back was turned.

Margaret was worried her older brother, Derek, would discover them.

"I found it!", Margaret exclaimed.

Suddenly a deep voice behind them said," Hi girls. What were you hoping to find?"

Margaret froze. "Aw crap"


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