General Fiction posted October 5, 2019


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Every person on this planet can empathize Joel's feelings

The First Day

by Mackenzie Cooper

Joel's heart raced. He twiddled his thumbs and looked up at his mom while she drove.

Joel was on the verge of tears as they neared the brick jungle maze with fences. Suddenly, a woman with a kind smile approached them.

"Hi, Joel! Welcome to kindergarten!"

Joel smiled.


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