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Four Seasons

The Wonder of God

27 total reviews 
Comment from Mistydawn
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Nature is miraculous that's for sure. Each season having it's purpose. The poem is well-written, descriptive, interesting. Reminding us how wonderful the four different seasons are.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your interesting comments about my essay.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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Very beautiful to read. I can see why you won the contest. Congratulations. I didn't see a thing to recommend so you have a wonderful night. Shirley

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Thanks Shirley for your heartwarming comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Rikki66
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Well written to the point you cover the year in three paragraphs at the same time you cover faith from salvation to redemption. As Easter comes so again we are reminded of promises fulfilled.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your careful perusal and heartwarming remarks. I do appreciate them.
reply by Rikki66 on 07-Apr-2019
    Welcome.
    Rikki
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I do appreciate it.
reply by Rikki66 on 07-Apr-2019
    Welcome.
    Rikki
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image, Raffaelina.
-I can see why you won
the contest, Congratulations.
-You have used vivid imagery
to describe the seasons, beginning
with the Autumn and Winter.
-You also describe Spring very
well with "bursting color."
-A good conclusion, too.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your in depth review, very thoughtful and much appreciated.
reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Apr-2019
    You are very welcome, Raffaelina.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
Comment from Sandra Montanino
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The seasons are our reminder that everything in life changes--nothing is forever. Nicely put.
I wouldn't use the word "stillness" so close to the word "still."

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Thank for your comments.
Comment from tfawcus
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A good description of the cyclical nature of the seasons and their relationship to eternity. They reflect the purpose of the Creator and remind us of our place in things.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from sandramitchell
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Congratulations on this well deserved win, Raffaelina. It's a lovely way to express your faith with the seasons. Your author's notes were excellent too. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Thank you for reading my poem and sharing your feelings.
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes indeed, for us southerners Autumn is the time of death, were nature seeks the repose of winter, (three days in the grave) but also Spring, the season of nature's resurrection, Beautifully written Raffealina, good job and congratulations, blessings , Roy

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
    It's comforting to know others feel the same. Thank you.
reply by royowen on 03-Apr-2019
    Oh yes
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is beautiful, inspirational, faith filled, and encouraging. I love the message of eternal life and that the season's attest to this. This is a beautifully written faith contest entry that definately deserved the win. Congratulations! Great job and well done!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Thank you for your eloquent review, much appreciated.
Comment from Kerry Robinson
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Hello there, my friend. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. This is a beautifully
penned entry on faith. I love your chosen descriptive words and comparison to natures rebirth. Bravo! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thank you again for the six stars.