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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Waiting For Tarzan"
art inspired poetry

16 total reviews 
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
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Well Rudyard Kipling, Edward Bulwer Lytton, Henry Rider Haggard, Arthur Conan Doyle and Edgar Rice Burroughs can all eat their heart out simultaneously and choke with laughter on this primal man'date' of yours! Excellent witty and rolling rhyme, make this a superb smile inducing poem and that makes you rout for the damsel in waiting! So whens the book due? :)

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for the generous 6 star award. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Hooray!! :) You have an ape-man for a dinner date....I'm thinking they'll be some banana souffle and, perhaps, banana pudding..? :) ;) LOL! :) Just be sure he puts 'Cheetah' out the house before things get intimate! ;) ;) A wonderful imagination you have, Lady Debra! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
*Sorry behind on reviews...just getting home from my youngest's 2-day college orientation (and of course travel time!) plus prep for same's wisdom teeth removal early Monday....can you say 'no time on computer'....LOL!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written humorous poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture provided by the club. Luckily she did not decide to jump because her date was late, a pleasant shocking surprise when tarzan shows up.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from jenintorre
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This is a great poem Debra. I love it. My kind of humour.
He's not here and get his arse in gear. Great rhyme. Thanks for the laugh. All the best. Jen.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I love it, it rocks a story about blind date on the internet and meeting her tarzan, without underwear of course, in the trees where he lives his life. Nicely done

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Sally Law
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Does your hubby know you're out on a limb waiting for the hunk? Sean is probably the hunk. ,+) a fun poem, so creative and fresh for the writing prompt. Good luck in the contest, dear Debra.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from BeasPeas
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Oh this is terrific, Debra. Sorry not to have a sixer for you. Great job with theme and rhyming. NOW we know why she waited so long on the bridge. Who wouldn't? I'm glad you made it for this post. Marilyn

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Maria Jose Garcia
Exceptional
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This is gorgeous, Debra. No matter how busy you are, you still have what it takes.
Your poems are well written and sooo funny.
Thanks for sharing and for brightening up my morning.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for the generous 6 star award. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Now you're embarrassing me. It's so nice of you to talk about this way. You should give yourself a pen name. Debra Write would be a nice description of your talents.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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OMG!!! HAHAHAHAHAH! Tarzan on a Tinder date!! This is hilarious and classic, Debra! I couldn't love it more. The visuals you presented are priceless!! Clever and SO very fun to read! xo

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!