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Fun With Words

Given a sporting chance, it's all a game!

14 total reviews 
Comment from Debra White
Exceptional
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Hello...
I know you! I can spot you a mile off LOL
You're at it again with your word wizardry, impressing me at each and every line.
I think inspiration doesn't visit you, but resides with you permanently.
Good luck in this contest (not that you need it!)
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
    Well spotted. I do have a few recognisable trade marks. I have to tell that muse to leave me alone sometimes, or else I'd be sitting on my backside writing all day. Thanks for your terrific review!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Oh, this is just lovely! It sings and it paints and frolics.... with differing rhyme patterns and slant and end rhymes... just a contest carnival!! ;) Such a wonderful thing to read first thing in the morning -- just makes the sun seem a little brighter and the game chasing those much-sought-after 'perfect words' a heckuvalot more fun!! ;) Beautifully done -- bravo! ;) :) Best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much for your glowing review, Yvette!
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Yes, it does appear that you do have fun with words. Your poem was a pleasure to read. The rhyme and rhythm make it sassy and bouncy! I like to read the poems out loud and see how they do. Your poem read aloud
just rolls off the tongue!
Really good job!
Patty


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 Comment Written 28-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
    Thanks for your appreciative review, Patty. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem Reading a poem aloud is certainly the best way to get into the rhythm of it.
reply by Patty Palmer on 28-Aug-2019
    You're welcome!! You did a great job!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I'm loving the fun meter here, a bouncy rhyme full of richly chosen words to create the scene and you definitely had fun with words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 28-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
    Thanks, Dolly! fun, fun, fun, wrestling with words... I had fishing and dancing and rodeo and cricket in there as well. Those words are very fit!