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I Believe

Very tired tonight, just rattling on.

10 total reviews 
Comment from WryWriter
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This "rattling on" paints delightful pictures of slices-of-life in the reader's mind. I found it well-written, entertaining, and a joy to read. Good artwork choice. Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019

Comment from LisaMay
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This is marvellously told, Gail. I can see why it gained you a podium finish in the voting. Your sense of humour is delightful, based on your accumulated life experience. So many interesting aspects about life to believe... then snooze.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is an interesting I believe poem with many facets to it. I especially like the stories about being older, walking to school forever, false teeth slipping, and joints that creak when you move. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

Comment from BeasPeas
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This is an exceptional essay and worthy of a sixer, which I don't have to give you. However, you've written a terrific piece and I wish you the best in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

Comment from Mia Twysted
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Grass is nicer. There was a steady pace that went along with this piece. It read as if I was hearing a cadence go off.

I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello mystery writer. I'm not sure how to comment on your writing in total other than to say I really like it. It is a subtle conversation and talks about several things in life that you believe. And it leaves your writer to ask himself the same question about what they believe. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

Comment from Gypsymooncat
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This was a real pleasure to read! I enjoyed the light hearted, quippy tone of it, it was well written and gave us a window into your life which is always a privilege for a reader. I laughed out loud at the mention of your hubby who goes to sleep as soon as his rump hits the recliner lol! Most men can sleep through WWIII I reckon.

The only thing I found was this, and I thought I'd comment:

"Don't remember -- but they endlessly -- same with sheeps -- (they) never quit chewing, even the babies..."

I don't think you need "they" twice here, and you also don't need an s at the end of sheep. One sheep is spelled "sheep", a group of sheep is spelled "sheep" not "sheeps".

Hope this helps! Good luck in the contest with what I think is a very grand entry xoxox

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

Comment from JudyE
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For a silly ramble, it was very entertaining - maybe because I can relate to everything you say here. I was nodding away in agreement the whole way. lol Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

Comment from Patty Palmer
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I found your rambling quite interesting and witty. Of course, this coming from a long time rambler herself. I believe that you have the art of rambling down! Keep on rambling@@
Patty

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

Comment from Katherine M. Kean
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This was an interesting view into your head. Something on the list for everyone. I would imagine you slept well having got rid of all that list, I certainly would have.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019