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Manipulation

Playing with our minds

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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned verse in fewer than ten words. The content is both timely and relevant and should strike a strong chord with many readers. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    Thank you for your encouragement. It is so gratifying to read your words, always.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello mystery writer. You've hit the nail right on the head. The green new deal is a scam and it is political manipulation and the whole purpose of it is to break America into pieces so the rest of the world can gather them up. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thanks, Robert. I knew you'd be on board.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 22-Oct-2019
    you're welcome
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Your entry for the Under Ten Competition has a clear and strong message.
You say much in only nine words.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thank you for your review. I love getting feedback.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this newsworthy writing in a creative way. I will have to look into that. I haven't heard about it yet. Don't drop your plate. I don't keep up with a lot of news since it's mainly negative.
Bill

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    As this is. It is one of the far left's platform... try Google.
    Thank you for your interest.
Comment from Aussie
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Please explain to this Aussie, what is the Green new deal? I suppose Trump dreamed it up on his Twitter account? We must act on climate change NOW! Man has abused what the Lord freely gave us to enjoy. Our national emblem, the beautiful Koala Bear is now an endangered species. Thanks for sharing and I hope to hear about your poem. XXK.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    The Green New Deal is what the Democrats are running on, not Trump. Look it up on Google. Thanks for your attention. And thank you for the 6 stars.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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I guess five stars for a naturally (or not so natural) long 'e' assonance with 'green' and 'Deal.' I have a tendency to resist anything that sounds Socialist, and I am wondering how Scotland coal miners are faring since coal mining was shut down entirely 3 years ago (since my uncle also was involved with that, but in Wyoming). Seems the use of the word 'scam' indicates more information is always necessary. Thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    There's too much at stake with the sweeping changes that are being introduced. A Country has a hard time with one change and there are multiple changes and shut-downs in this deal, that do not make sense. It sounds like a Government taking over everything. Thanks for your input.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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I'm not buying any of the Green Plans. They're going to reduce emissions at some future date, and it's never going to happen. The only thing we can do is fix things right now, and people won't like it.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your input.
Comment from royowen
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This modern generation knows it's going to hell in a hand cart, and the solutions to the problems are not really going to work, people are not going to change, even though some change is happening, people won't forsake comfort for discomfort, even in the short term. Well done, a great entry in this contest, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thanks, Roy. Your input is much appreciated and always very meaningful.
reply by royowen on 21-Oct-2019
    Well done,
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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oh no! not another scam in progress. I think we've had enough of those lately. We have telemarketers calling. I do feel sorry for them because the response they get isn't always good.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your feedback.
reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 21-Oct-2019
    it's only a review. Do you get a few of those telemarketers calling?
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    More than a few!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I'm not sure what the "green new deal' is but it sounds like it is something that has upset you. It it is something to do with the environment and climate change, then there are many stories being banded about, you must have heard a scam here, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    It's online in google. The outcome will be disastrous. Thank you for your attention to my contest entry. Another word, instead of a scam, is a joke.