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Seasonal Poems

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A collection of Seasonal Poems

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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A Merry Christmas to you and yours too, Sandra. This is a lovely Chime Operandi greeting. It sounds like it will be a lovely time for all.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    I am still catching up on the back log due to power failures.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra.
Comment from patcelaw
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Sandra, this is a well written Chime Operandi format. It was well presented and was a joy to read.
Have a blessed Christmas Season.
Patricia

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra
Comment from BeasPeas
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"With bling we deck the Christmas trees." That's a good line. Mine is blingy. I think you've executed Dolly's new form well. It looks to me like you have followed it perfectly. Marilyn

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for presenting your Christmas poem in Dolly's new and complex form. I enjoyed your internal and end rhymes in this Chime Operandi. Merry, merry- Joan

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Sandra. I appreciate you attempting a different style of poetry and from my understanding, it looks like you accomplished the goal. Nice job. Robert

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 01-Jan-2020
    You're welcome
Comment from Gloria ....
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Excellent Chime Operandi, Sandra. Your cross-rhymes are all in the right places as are your end rhymes and you've written a most lovely Christmas greeting to everyone too.

Nice job and many thanks for sharing. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra
Comment from Therese Caron
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This is a very well written poem, following a difficult pattern. It also describes every part of Christmas, including decorating with bling, waiting for Santa Claus, and singing songs to the newborn King. The image you chose is lovely and draws the eye to the poem. Very nice work!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra
Comment from Ben Colder
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I find nmothing wrong with the style or wording. The stanzas are right on in my opinion. It must have been easy or it flows like it is. Thanks again for sharing your poem.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your poem is vividly descriptive and well-written. The flow from jubilantly celebrating the fun side of Christmas to reverently praising the Lord is smooth and pleasing.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra
Comment from Teri7
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Sandra, This is a very lovely and very well written poem you have penned wishing a Merry Christmas to all. I love this format you chose and your art work is beautiful. It all went together very well. I hope you and yours have a very Merry and Happy Christmas too! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Happy New Year to you and your family.

    Sandra