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This Day

A meaningful life.

43 total reviews 
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Raffaelina Lowcock,
You have BEAUTIFULLY depicted the theme in one line using impressive and PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your uplifting review. The voting is going on right now.
reply by RPSaxena on 04-Apr-2020
    R. Lowcock, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Raul1
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the competition. It is clear and concise. Well written. Excellent work! Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Raul, it is being voted on now. Did you vote? Your words are really appreciated.
reply by Raul1 on 02-Apr-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from The Death
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Your one line poem makes a strong statement. One should try to live in the present and be thankful for all the gifts he or she has. Each day brings something new to us, and learning from it will help us move ahead. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    That is sage advice. Thank you for your thoughts.
Comment from sandramitchell
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I quite agree with those thoughts, we must value what we do and store them away to look back on. Every day should count for something. Well done, this is a fabulous one line poem. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    How kind. Thank you for your compliment.
Comment from evesayshi
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In my opinion, a personal commentary addressing the truth in one's life, simply and with regard to personal conviction in the importance of intent - fully compliant with the prompt in its one line delivery. Best wishes in the contest with this succinct, but purposeful contest entry...

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    The words you use in this review are a wonderful compliment. Thank you.
reply by evesayshi on 02-Apr-2020
    You are very welcome, Raffaelina, my pleasure indeed...Eve
Comment from Bichon
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This was a very sweet poem to read. You have expressed sediments for only one day, but in so highlighting the value that each day has for us. We must live each one to the fullest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Ralf. You have created quite a weighty statement in your one line poem. You have told this reader you are living one day at a time and you are remembering and acting upon the commitments that make up the moving parts in your life.

Well done. Good luck in the contest

Robert




 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    You have it right Robert. Thanks for your detailed review.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 02-Apr-2020
    You're welcome
Comment from Sally Law
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Fabulous one liner for the contest, dear, Raffaelina. I have a hard time getting my whole mouth in one line. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Thank you for this generous review. I am grateful.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Raffaelina!
What a beautiful rendering that allows the reader to pause and reflect.
How wonderful it would be if every day would be filled with the "purposes for which I live." Love the phrasing...and the message!

Thank you for sharing!

diane

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for this positive review. I do appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from RShipp
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What a magnificent philosophy by which to live one's life.

The picture you chose was a great fit- the purpose of the flower's bud to the flower's bloom.

Best of luck with the "One Line Poem" contest.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful compliments, in this review. I do so appreciate your words.