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Everyday Valentine

Not just one day but everyday

15 total reviews 
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

That's awesome! There are a lot of people who would dearly love to receive a Valentine like that! You don't have to work for Hallmark! Create your own line of cards and sell them! Beautifully crafted. Eloquently expressed! Well Done!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you again!
reply by Brenda Henderson on 30-Jan-2020
    You're welcome
Comment from Therese Caron
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What a sweet romantic valentine poem. And you are very right, we can make a big deal out of one day, or show love every day. Very nicely written, I love the words you used. You also chose a great image to accompany your writing. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Gail Denham
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Excellent comments to wife - and true. Why do we pile everything into one day. I often wonder that about the Christmas season. Why do all the parties, gatherings, concerts, etc. have to be in one month. Christmas day - yes - but spread out the parties.
Good job

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

what a gorgeous poem. Can you imagine how this poem could affect many of the loved ones that were lost in the helicopter crash in California? It was so tragic and close to Valentine's Day. It would be nice if we could write a poem about everyone of those who were lost.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you Rosemary for your gracious review. Yes, that was so tragic, I definitely shed a few tears hearing that news, a single father of a young daughter myself it really tugged at my heartstrings.
Comment from Kristi Stalder
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I loved this! Beautifully written, and it digs deeper than the materialistic meaning of Valentine's day. I especially loved how it shines a light on everything that is sometimes overlooked, and these are the most important aspects of a romantic relationship. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
~Kristi

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you Kristi for your time, review and analysis, you broke it down perfectly. That is the precise message I was trying to convey. Have a great day!
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Love it! Flows beautifully and the thought behind the words is so true! I am primarily a rhyming poet myself so I very much enjoy your craft. Keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you Martie! From one rhymer to another, I greatly appreciate it!
Comment from judester
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Oh she's a lucky Valentine. I really like this but there are a couple unnecessary words that affect the flow. Read it aloud. Bravo, see you at the finish line, judester

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you Judester.
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Everyday Valentine'
Is a RHYMING VALENTINE'S DAY LOVE POEM contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you good Doctor, I appreciate it.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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What a gorgeous picture! And what a lovely testament to love, real love expressed 365 days a year. Without that, Valentine's Day is meaningless. Good luck!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Yes I agree. Thank you Darlene, have a good day!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Valentine's Day Love Poem contest.
This well rhymed verse tells of loving everyday, not just showing it on Valentines day.
Well told and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you.