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workplace harassment

5 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. Kean
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This is an extremely nice peep into what women working in
essentially a man's environment go through. I'm not sure it can be classed as flash fiction, as it's not a full story, but I have seen other flash contest where the winner gets away with that, so I hope you too can do well.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Glad you enjoyed it, Katherine.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Last three words definitely show another perspective, as it seems meant to do. Well-written with dialogue that sounds like vocal complaints. Sounds like Monica wishes she was the recipient of any of that attention. Thanks for posting. Good luck in that contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thanks, Crystie. That's the trouble with "harassment"--some people like the attention, so it's hard to know what is mere flirting and what is offensive . . . until you learn the hard way.
Comment from papa55mike
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I guess groping is a matter of the point of view. What a wonderfully written story and I love the picture. I wish I had a six.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thanks, Papa!
    That?s the trouble with ?harassment??some people like the attention.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Coco Jane. Thank you for sharing your flash fiction, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thanks, 13.
Comment from robyn corum
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CJ,

hahaha It's all a matter of perspective, isn't it? One man's poison, right? Poor girl. This piece was nicely presented and I was able to picture the scene well. This should do well in the voting. Good luck!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Robyn.

    That?s the trouble with ?harassment??some people like the attention.